I see...what makes him "evil" in your story? Maybe if you want to use the child idea, then he could be the one trying to kill it and the innocence within the child's eyes can speak to his heart. Or he could for some reason have a very innocent person always around him and they could change him by their actions and words. Just a thought...
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