Hmmmm...I agree that the child in the bushes thing is a bit dramatic...but it could prove to be interesting! What exactly do you mean "the breadking point for Envinyatalis"??? Maybe I missed that somewhere? I suggest making a list of ideas for your story, even if two ideas contradicted each other, that way you can decide which you like better. Then, make an outline as best as possible, with room to change things around a bit. Pieces of literature can always be improved even after publication, the editing process goes on infinitely!
Have a great day!
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