So....
Ferethor and Maen go in to get what they seek, Ferethor would linger for a bit just curious about the Archives, not really suspecting any trouble, and meanwhile the younger soldier has alerted some guards about the break-in; they storm in, surrounding Ferethor, ready to arrest or kill him. Meanwhile outside, the others are getting impatient about exactly what is taking Ferethor so long, and some, Atharen included, have a rather bad feeling about his delay...Atharen and Crystal (?) go back in to find Ferethor surrounded. They get him out as described above, slam and jam the door to delay the guards a bit, and then get as far away as possible sharpish.
They should probably then disperse into, say, groups of two or three so as to make themselves less conspicuous, as the guards would be looking for them all together in their larger group, agreeing to meet up later, maybe in the Inn used before. What do youse think?
Ok...Everdawn or Eorl, you should probably write the first part; get into the archives etc and have Ferethor a-lingering etc, then surrounded...that should take you a few posts, and can I ask that you don't go further than that, Eorl? I'd like to have a bit of a write in for the attack