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Old 02-22-2004, 07:50 AM   #188
Eorl of Rohan
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Ferethor noted that the citadel guards here were mostly youths without experience in battle. They were also armed only with spears, which was almost of no use in close combat like this. Moreover, they were reluctant to shed blood of a fellow Gondorian. Ferethor the Captain of Guards was also known and admired by many young sentiniels and all have heard of the fame of his valour and skill of arms. He may yet break out of this ring...

((And the rescue scene should be continued from here. I will write an example. However I do not want to misuse Atharen character without Amanaduial the Archer's permission, and this may seem like a misuse.))

The entrance door slid open silently. Ferethor stared with only a widening of the eyes that betrayed his fear and amaze at Atharen with a silver-bound kindjal in his hand. 'Fool!' He thought, panic gleaming in his eyes, "If he is captured as an accomplice, who'd protect the company, for Eru's sake?"

Atharen slid his knife into Meren's back just as silently, and Meren crumpled without a gasp. Knowing that he had no more choice, Ferethor twisted himself free of the surprised Guards, who have not yet recovered from their shock. Ferethor drew his slender elven blade with a fluid movement, his years of experience and hardened reflex taking over in the instant chaos and confusion that issued. Even as Ferethor slashed out of the room, Atharen slammed the outside door shut, the door where the soldiers have entered from.
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