Oh great...Helky...
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His hair is as dark as his skin and it reaches till his butt since he refuses to let anybody with scisors near his head.
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Uh...Helky? What were you thinking!! [img]smilies/eek.gif[/img]
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she was so dazzled that she lost track and fell of a cliff.
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Uh huh. How about she died in giving birth because there was no one to help. Perhaps the bleeding wouldn't stop or such like...? Please try and go with something simple, Helky. And stop calling me Durexi! At least make up your mind how to spell it!
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...uttering his frustration on a nearby tree.
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How about 'taking out' instead of 'uttering'...
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Thorgom took one of his throwing axes
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I thought it was throwing knives... Make up your mind! You can carry 7 knives much more easily than 7 axes, however small. So...
Dude, here's your biggest problem: the resistors aren't evil! Change him to a convert, and all will be fine.
While I'm reluctant to let you join, for reasons you should be aware of [img]smilies/mad.gif[/img] , we are at a lack for RPers...All I can say is that I better not have to do this for every one of your posts!! I know, I know...you're a dutchman...just...try...maybe you should PM your posts to me, so I can do my beautiful editing job! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img]
Nerindel: It would be great if you brought some of your crew! Sevora will put you and the other warriors in charge of them, so all the main characters can give orders. Also, I hope you will allow everyone to make up the personalities and names for some of them in their posting. I think that would work out best...you think...?
Lyra: We will start soon I think. We can't wait too much longer. If no one's gonna join, no one is. Maybe...Friday? Oh, and be nice to your Daddy! [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] [img]smilies/evil.gif[/img]
Everyone: Thankyou! If those who are willing to play two characters could write up a short bio, because they won't be
main main characters. And we can introduce any little secondary characters in our posting...or...would that be too confusing?