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Old 12-12-2002, 07:51 PM   #11
Susan Delgado
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Me too. Here's my crowfile. By the way, I love the title!

Krikaw, age four.

One of many, the thing that makes Krikaw stand out is his reliability and speed. More inntelligent than some members of the flock, Krikaw has beeen used a a long distance messenger and scout since he was a barely fledged chick. He's of average size, with glossy black feathers and sharp eyes.
He's a bit bossy with the younger crebain, but Akaaw allows it because Krikaw has never overstepped his responsibility and he recognizes that Krikaw has had many varied experiences and his bossiness is in some ways a cover for teaching the youngsters many things they need to know to be good scouts for Saruman.

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Krikaw awoke in time to see Akaaw flying overhead. Now where would he be going before the rest of the flock was up and breakfasting? Perhaps he'd recieved a summons from the Master. With a flip of his wings, he settled back into place, not yet ready to rise.

Hearing Fingot's clacking beak, he lifted his head again and watched the younger birds stumbling around with a touch of disgust. Turning his head to peer off the branch and onto the ground, he glided down in search of breakfast.

Is this ok?

[ December 12, 2002: Message edited by: Susan Delgado ]
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