Welcome to the Downs, Ulairi! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
Those are pretty good. You have a real knack for descriptive details .
The Men of Harad - Arabic-looking with dark, flashing eyes and white turbans, leather armour and fast, thin horses
Lobelia and Lotho SB - Lobelia is slightly chubby for a hobbit, with a hooked nose and eyes that are always looking for a scandal. She wears conservative dresses and has lots of curly brown hair; Lotho is thinner, keeps his eyes to the ground or on Lobelia, wears shabbier clothing and has a slightly furtive, worried air.
That's all I can think of for now.
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"'You," he said, "tell her all. What good came to you? Do you rejoice that Maleldil became a man? Tell her of your joys, and of what profit you had when you made Maleldil and death acquainted.'" -Perelandra, by C.S. Lewis
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