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If I got you right, you mean the reader sees everything through group A&Bīs POV. In that case, we couldnīt use the POV of group C, which would basically mean we couldnīt have anyone play them, riiight? I donīt think thatīs a good idea, but if I mizunderstood you, just tell me, ok?
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Oh no! I think both point of views should be played and shown, however group C doesn't necessarily need to say, "hey, we work for the Corsairs!" They could play their parts as power hungry and manipulative and never mention who they are working for (until later of course, I'm just talking about he beginning).