Nonesuch,
That was pretty good; you have a good grasp of English and aren't afraid to use it, though you should still check your spelling.
I'm a little concerned about your lack of experience; you have only 11 posts here and I haven't seen you around the Inns. Can you tell us a little more about where you've RPed before? Without knowing this, we have no way of knowing how good you are at staying in character or how well you can run a game.
If you can't give me some idea of your experience, I'm afraid I may have to reject your proposal, interesting and well written as it is, and send you to play a few games in the Shire before resubmitting it.
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