Nuru- Looks great to me, I read your post Maika, he looks fine [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img].
Lyra- check pms! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
Alak- Siriel hasn't yet responded to Pelien. I had a lot to respond to with that post, and it is still in progress.
Nuru or Manardariel- ending the party now is fine, I can do it when I respond to Pelien.
Everyone- to clarify on what Manardariel said before about marking your posts, it would be extra super helpful if you could put a bold title at the top like "Finduilas' Welcoming Party" or "Pelien's Tea Party" or what have you, so that it is immediately clear what part of the story your post corresponds to. (Thanks Pio!)
Also, there's a difference between a secondary character and a character like "Beren" who appeared in Lyra's post. A secondary character would be one who would not be a major player in the story, but would have some impact on events (subplots) and would appear consistently. Mentioning another person whom your character happens to know, but who will not be in the story aside from a few fleeting mentions doesn't require bio. (Feredir, Siriel's date at the Welcome event will be one of those).
Sophia
[ July 06, 2003: Message edited by: Sophia the Thunder Mistress ]
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The seasons fall like silver swords, the years rush ever onward; and soon I sail, to leave this world, these lands where I have wander'd. O Elbereth! O Queen who dwells beyond the Western Seas, spare me yet a little time 'ere white ships come for me!
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