Himaran,
I went ahead and pasted in the end of Novnarwen's post in the spot right after yours as you requested. I did some minor editing to help it flow smoothly.
There was one other change I made. You had stuffed the prisoners into Heldor's old cell. But you can't do that....otherwise Frea would have easily leapt from the window to make his escape since the bars were gone. So I changed that phrase to a "spare cell."
Hope this is ok....
Cami
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