The Forest Fire scene seems ready to me; the sub-plots for this sub-plot (ie. who will take the word of the fire to the town etc.) can be decided later when the action takes place, right? And of course things would go too smoothly if all the little ones could be saved so 'easily'!
Sharon, your view on this?
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Nuru, sorry I totally forgot to praise Edmund! [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] I have a brother, 9 years younger than me, and now I believe you somehow know him! As if that was posibble, but anyways...
Have you thought what your, I mean Edmund's relation to Pio's character Willem might be? Are they in the same 'band' that terrorizes the Hobbit kids or not? I don't think he'd approve the plan with the pigs that Pio suggested?
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Pio's mention of Fornost as the Deadman's Dike made me frown and take a look at the Encyclopedia of Arda (sorry; I have to rely on that source at the moment as I foolishly borrowed my books just when I need them the most - I feel lost without the maps and appendices!) and this is what I found:
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Nonetheless, the emergence of Angmar saw evil things multiply in the eastern lands, driving a westward migration across Eriador. Notable among those travelling out of the east were the Hobbits, and it was during Malvegil's time as King that the main Hobbit settlement in Bree took place.
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So was the place called Deadman's Dike when there was still King there? This is of course only a minor detail but maybe the King Malvegil's name should feature in the proposal somewhere, if only to be overly explicit in 'historical' detail. Doesn't that sound just the thing for us, Sharon?? [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img]
~Annun