Actually, Imladris, not over the top. There's just one thing I'd like you to change - to bring it in line with what's coming down the road. Have the prisoner say something like this too, "and leech 'em and catch their blood in flagons to be brought... - (he won't say where) - ... and they have to feel pain when their blood comes."
Word it how you like, but have him say something about taking all the blood they can out of a sacrificial victim. Gruesome, eh? [img]smilies/evil.gif[/img]
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