Alatariel, I'm sorry for not being very clear in my previous post. I'll try to clarify.
I think you're post was great, as far as it went. I didn't mean to ask you to delete any of it.
I am asking if you'd be willing to take cues from Eswen's, Menel's, and Lumiel's posts (and mine if you like), and describe Finėwen's actions as they relate to Eswen's plan. And please feel free to surprise us all with a plot twist of some kind. Examples of plot twists so far have been Lira being injured so badly, and Eswen's alter-ego "coming out of hiding", so to speak. Perhaps something about Finėwen that nobody would expect, but you know is hidden inside her. Or not, whatever you want to do. I hope that helps.
Verrrry interesting, by the way, Eswen! [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]
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