Pardon me if I'm sticking my nose where it doesn't belong, but I was just browsing around and I came across this thread. Gorothlammothiel, that is a lovely poem, and sounds like Tolkien wrote it himself. Well, except for the "crack" line. [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] The following "back" one sounds a bit odd to me too, but no matter... I personally really liked it. =)
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Merry shrugged his shoulders. “It could be a love triangle. Like about a week ago, I was in love with Angela AND Estella, but then I decided to break it off with Angela…” He sighed dreamily, but Pippin lifted an eyebrow. “Angela thought your name was Timothy,” he pointed out innocently, and Merry glared at him. “It could happen to anybody…” - Excerpt from my "Three Blind Spies" story (see fanfic section)
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