I have now posted my
Revised version of the Ruin of Doriath in the
private forum. These were made in mind in trying to capture as most of the
intended Tolkien ideas as possible. I have used basically the
Tale of the Nauglafring and the
Published Silmarillion in my versions.
I would have liked to have used more the QS30 but I think that because of it's size, it is not too useful, only as guidelines to the story.
I made, as in the
Quenta, that the messenger who comes to Beren and Lúthien to be Melian and not an unnamed one as in the QS77 or Huan in the
Tale.
Beren, as it is stated in the
Letters 247:
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But I can foresee one action that they took, not without a bearing on The L.R. It was in Ossiriand, a forest country, secret and mysterious before the west feet of the Ered Luin, that Beren and Lúthien dwelt for a while after Beren's return from the Dead (I p. 206). Beren did not show himself among mortals again, except once. He intercepted a dwarf-army that had descended from the mountains, sacked the realm of Doriath and slain King Thingol, Lúthien's father, carrying off a great booty, including Thingol's necklace upon which hung the Silmaril. There was a battle about a ford across one of the Seven Rivers of Ossir, and the Silmaril was recovered, and so came down to Dior Beren's son, and to Elwing Dior's daughter and Earendel her husband (father of Elros and Elrond). It seems clear that Beren, who had no army, received the aid of the Ents – and that would not make for love between Ents and Dwarves.
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That is the reason as to why in my revision, I deleted the references to the green Elves that helped Beren in the QS77.
I used some parts of the
Tale, such as the detail of the fight between Beren and Naglandur because I felt that it would add more to the story.
I retained the part that while Lúthien wearing the Silmaril, the sons of Fëanor would not assail them, because of the reference of
The Tale of Years D1
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Curufin and Celegorm, hearing of the sack of Menegroth, ambushed the Dwarves at the Fords of Ascar as they sought to carry off the Dragon-gold to the mountains. The Dwarves were defeated with great loss, but they cast the gold into the river, which was therefore after named Rathlóriel. Great was the anger of the sons of Fëanor to discover that the Silmaril was not with the Dwarves; but they dared not to assail Lúthien. Dior goes to Doriath and endeavours to recover the realm of Thingol.
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It is interesting that this note says that both Curufin and Celegorm attacked the dwarves but this was rejected in the letter that i quoted above.
Lastly, I'm sure that my versions are full of errors, but it is my hope that they can be used as a guide to this section.