[onewhitetree]

I agree about "renewed," but another word that should at least be considered, for many of the same reasons, is "shall".

Also one should note the repetition of words related to light and warmth, especially compared to the overall message of the poem.

Oh dear, I'll stop before I get too into this. We don't want any overanalysis, by any means!

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