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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-05-2019, 02:57 PM
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Replies: 15
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ArcusCalion
Oh good catch Fin! I have a few points.
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Oh good catch Fin! I have a few points. First, I would make this slight change for smoothness of transition: Second, in this narrative you've made, the Nazgul search the Vale of Anduin twice.... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-01-2019, 10:18 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 12,082
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ArcusCalion
Thank you! It was certainly time-consuming!
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Thank you! It was certainly time-consuming! 1) Agreed. 2) Agreed for the inclusions. Apologies if I forgot to make a post about the other addition, it must have slipped my mind. 3) I think... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
07-15-2018, 10:04 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 12,082
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ArcusCalion
Agreed to the editing change, and I await your...
Agreed to the editing change, and I await your restructuring proposal. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
07-13-2018, 11:59 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 12,082
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ArcusCalion
Sorry to triple post, but I found this addition...
Sorry to triple post, but I found this addition for the chapter only just now. Right after HR-SL-11 finishes and the part I removed (HR-SL-12) begins, I propose we add this in given in A Reader's... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
07-13-2018, 08:22 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 12,082
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ArcusCalion
Actually, reviewing the draft for the next...
Actually, reviewing the draft for the next chapter, I think it is best to take the entire addition of HR-SL-15 through the end of HR-SL-15.4 and move it to the next chapter. It fits into that draft... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
07-13-2018, 06:50 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 12,082
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ArcusCalion
I agree with everything except HR-SL-15.4 for two...
I agree with everything except HR-SL-15.4 for two reasons. The first and smaller one is that there remain a good many verbs that are in the present tense, when they should be in past tense, which I... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
07-11-2018, 10:47 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 12,082
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ArcusCalion
The Hunt for the RingThis is the first draft of the chapter The Hunt for the Ring. This chapter uses the text of The Hunt for the Ring from UT as a base text, and I mark the first instance of the main text. In UT,... |
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