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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
12-19-2018, 04:05 PM
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1) The works for me.
2)
I added in one...
1) The works for me. 2) I added in one (very long) sentence: The new sentence explains why the Valar made the decision they did with regards to the form of the Istari. I don't know how... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
12-14-2018, 03:40 PM
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Replies: 18
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gandalf85
I really like the inclusion of the poem at the...
I really like the inclusion of the poem at the beginning of this chapter. I agree with Arcus that moving the last line of the poem into the main text makes for a less abrupt start and flows well... |
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