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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-15-2019, 06:24 PM
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gandalf85
I like the idea of making the locations of the...
I like the idea of making the locations of the palantiri only known to a few, but I suggest a slight change to make it sound better to my ears: ... That was guarded by the Elves, and though... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-14-2019, 08:59 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 11,742
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gandalf85
Ahh, OK, that rule regarding quotes makes sense....
Ahh, OK, that rule regarding quotes makes sense. Regarding the authorial voice, Fin, do you come down on the side of removing them from this chapter? I think they feel out of place; as you mentioned,... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-11-2019, 02:52 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 11,742
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gandalf85
2) All right, I wasn't sure if this was...
2) All right, I wasn't sure if this was intentionally kept in or accidentally missed. I'm OK with keeping it. 3) Ahh Ok, I thought I had seen it both ways (scepter and sceptre), I didn't know... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-10-2019, 05:53 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 11,742
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gandalf85
I like the placement of the LOTR prologue...
I like the placement of the LOTR prologue material in this chapter. 1) I have a concern about some of the instances where the authorial voice creeps in, namely (as noted by Arcus) "That law was... |
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